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Thursday, May 7, 2020

My bird work

here is my bird work hope you like it

1 comment:

  1. Morena Amelia. Well done on your bird work. I like the way you have written your own beginning paragraph for this myth and given it a new title. Would you be able to give a rating for what you thought of this story... 5 out of 10? Or 8 out of 10?
    Well done finding 1 syllable words. Do you think you could add a couple of two syllable words to that slide, such as 'Ka-hu' (Kahu) or 'com-ing'?
    Keep up your hard work! You are going well!

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